Suddenly at night they’re all lost and confused. Streets and stops in the light of day have a misplaced familiarity after it gets dark. It was blackout night, for their minds. “Oh, please, sorry, I forgot to call my stop, can you…?” The doors open for her, unlawfully but kind. Then we turn into a street and he needs to get off, presses the button, last minute, hurls himself onto the doors and calmly disappears along the sidewalk. Then there’s Fidgety, the seat too small, has three phones tucked in three pockets, jean jacket, sneakers and a cap. The fluorescent bar showing the stops is not working, will the driver please tell him where his stop is? He will. So he alights, checks his map on one phone, calls a friend on another and the third he lets ring twice before putting it on silent. The bus rides off and it’s a different kind of quiet.
In response to: https://fivedotoh.com/2018/10/09/fowc-with-fandango-silent/
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I liked this, even though my bus riding experiences are rarely ever silent.
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🙂 Thanks! This was silent because it was late at night – right before midnight. During the day is a totally different thing…
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I like imagery and recognition of a different world based on dark and light!
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Thank you very much for your comment. So much seems to change when it gets dark
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